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It’s raining again today,
As I watch the clouds roll by,
I thought of the sad, sad day,
That day you said goodbye.

The rain falls heavily now,
Drumming on the window panes,
I remember all your promises, your vow,
Unfinished, incomplete they remain.

The sky is dark and worrying,
The rain is falling hard,
That day I died, still crying,
Over the state of my broken heart.

Thunder and lightning clap and cheer,
The roads are wet and muddy,
I wept; shed more than a tear,
I started to think ~
Am I unlucky?

To have loved so deep and true,
Yet be broken down to the core,
I put my love and trust in you,
Tell me ~
What was that all for?

The rain is beginning to mist,
With new sight I see the lands,
I will stop living just to exist,
I will not reach out to find your hands.

It rained again today,
But now it’s calm and cool,
I think I’ll go out and play,
Because I realize now ~
I am no fool.

If it rains again soon,
I’ll put a jacket on, regardless,
Because it’s a lovely afternoon,
To spend wallowing in darkness.

If it rains again in days to come,
I will remember you each time,
For you taught me not to succumb,
For I am still in my prime.

If it rains again later,
I’ll play in the rain ~
Jump up and down,
No longer broken, I am better,
Built strong again on solid ground.
:icondrkay85:
A little inspiration by the surprising onset of rain in Penang, my hometown. This is a poem from the heart and even though the pain was unbearable, it taught me a lot of things about myself :)
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~Silencedbook9 Mar 12, 2013  Student Writer
Need a hug?
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*drkay85 Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No thank you. I'm doing fine :) thanks for taking the time to post a comment but in all honesty posting "need a hug?" on three of my pieces is neither helpful or constructive.
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~Silencedbook9 Mar 13, 2013  Student Writer
Sorry. I thought I could help for a little bit. Sorry again.
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*drkay85 Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
it's ok. I much appreciate the time you spent leaving me a comment. was hoping it was something constructive is all.
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~Silencedbook9 Mar 13, 2013  Student Writer
Oh. Okay.
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This is a greatly needed reminder and its worded wonderfully!
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*drkay85 Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you for taking the time to leave a feedback. its a constant reminder for myself not to take comfort in my past pain and to live life to the fullest
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